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One Season of Sunshine
Julia London has written a family romance novel entitled 'One Season of Sunshine'. This is the story of a woman and a man by the names of Jane and Ash. Jane is a second-grade teacher who knows she is adopted but wants to find out more about the mother who gave her up. Ash is a father and businessman who wants to keep his family together in working through losing his wife in a car accident. This is a story of adoption and trying to accept what has happened in the past in dealing with mental illness of a family member and how it is affecting others one way or another. Julia London is a show and tell writer for the reader will be able to picture all the various surroundings from Jane's family in Austin to Ash's mansion to the playhouse along with all the emotions exhibited by the characters.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Irish Rebel
Nora Roberts has written a short novel entitled 'Irish Rebel'. This is the story of Keeley and Brian and the world of horses in many ways. Each of these characters has choices to make in order to move on in their lives one one way or another. Nora Roberts writes scenes that are picturesque even in words for the reader will be able to see Keeley at her school as well as Brian working in the other facets of the world of horses.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Captivated and Entranced
This is one of those Nora Roberts novels that are two novels in one book. The first one is 'Captivated' this is the story of Morgana and Nash, a witch and a screenwriter. They each have to make several decisions in how they want to keep this relationship going. Nora Roberts has offered the reader a romance along with a family story as well. This is the start of a series of a family of witches and how they deal with the many ways that mortals see them. In the second book entitled 'Entranced' this is the story of Mel and Sebastian, a PI and a psychic working on a baby stealing racket. Nora Roberts is a writer that is quite visual in both these stories. She is a writer for those who like romance but also likes mystery and family stories.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
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By Raul Puente 2 years ago in Critique
Dork Diaries
Rachel Renee Russell along with Nikki and Erin Russell have conspired to write and illustrate ' Dork Diaries Tales from a No-so Dorky Drama Queen'. This is a female version in my opinion of the 'Wimpy Kid' books by Jeff Kinney. The 'Dork Diaries' in a way show how some girls see and survive middle school drama of all kinds even though they seem quite mean and dramatic as in the theme to this sequel to Dork Diaries. It is also a story that will show how rumors start and even hurt all involved somehow. On the technical format of this book for it is written as if a middle school girl wrote it and drew it. In my opinion the illustrations could be used as coloring pages too.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Jordan Peterson breaks his silence on the Israel-Palestine war
One of the most well-known public intellectuals in the world, Dr. Jordan Peterson is in high demand for his opinions on a wide range of topics. Since its beginning on October 7th, the war that is currently raging in Israel has been the topic of intense discussion on a global scale. Jordan Peterson had a conversation about his opinions on the current conflict with Sky News Allstars Pier Morgan and Andrew Bolt.
By Laureen Van Raamsdonk2 years ago in Critique
Dog Days
Jeff Kinney has written 'Diary of a Wimpy Kid Dog Days. 'Dog Days' is the one where Greg is on summer vacation. Greg has to deal with Rowley, Rodrick, and his other mom and dad in how he spends this vacation and how each of the sees what 'FUN' is all about. Jeff writes this book in a journal format as if Greg has written his inner most feelings. The illustrations are even drawn as if Greg drew them. There will be times that readers whether adult or youth will remember living and even surviving what Greg is dealing with during his summer vacation.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Bomb
'Bomb' by Steve Shein wrote this book quite a few years ago. It is a youth historical book that has a full title of 'Bomb' The Race to Build and Steal the World's Most Dangerous Weapon'. This is the story of the beginnings of the development of the Atomic bomb during World War II. Steve introduces readers the scientists and spies that created and tried to steal these plans of weapons of mass destruction. There were scientists, politicians, various spies from persons named Albert Einstein and Robert Oppenheimer to Harry Gold. Steve wrote this book so that young readers will begin to understand the basic history as to why this weapon was even invented and how science was a part of this. There will be times that readers whether adult or youth will have some memories of current times.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Harlequin Romances
Who has read Harlequin Romance novels out there? I know I am a man but I was very bored and looking for some quick reads, so I picked up one of these books and started reading. For some reason some of these books made sense in a way if you can get past all the romantic scenes and just focus on the family side of the story. There are a lot of lessons that one can learn from these kinds of novels, believe it or not. There are many authors who write these stories that are quite show and tell for the reader can visualize the story as they read. They are quite escapist literature for those who just want to get away from things for just a little while for they are quick reads.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Ming Ming's Foodie Adventure
Food, glorious food! as the old saying goes from the Dicken's novel 'Oliver Twist'. 'Ming Ming's Foodie Adventure' was written by Eloise Richer and illustrated by Dotty Albro. This is a story all about a young red panda and his search for his favorite food. Ming Ming, the red panda lives in a zoo where the zookeepers are not sure what to feed him. Ming Ming goes through the zoo in search of his favorite snack and then out the gate.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Now What?
'Now What?' is a children's picture book written by Brenda Faatz and illustrated by Peter Trimarco. "Now What? is a question we all hear from children at all ages and even by some adults. It is a story that shares a story of diversity. The main character of is a little girl by the name of Lizzy, who likes to stay busy as you will see if you read the story. Lizzy has a pet dog that she plays with all the time from one activity to another and this is when she meets a new friend.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Today I Want to be a Witch
'Today I Want to be a Witch' is a children's picture book written by Mark Smith. This is a story that will have the reader remembering their childhood antics. This is the story of Bo and her toy friend Scruffy. Bo's mother is around, but as some mum's are usually quite busy. Bo and Scruffy play a lot of games throughout the day. There is one wish that Bo has throughout the story but will it be resolved.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique