My mind is an ocean
unpredictable and violent at times
Waves crash into me, knocking me off balance.
I am weightless and at the mercy of the ocean.
unknowing where the surface is
I take a deep breath and start to swim.
I make my way beneath the waves.
where the ocean is calm
It is there I find peace and clarity.
My lungs will not allow me to stay here.
With air fleeting, I make my way to the surface.
I catch my breath
and battle the waves once again
I am stuck here until I catch my breath.
and make the journey under
to catch the peace I need
About the Creator
David Williams
My ideas far exceed my writing capabilities!
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions

Comments (3)
Lovely ✨️❤️
Powerful imagery and very relatable!
Lovely poetry excellent ♦️♦️♦️