Soft sky, infinite
Sky-ku Challenge _Haiku-poem by Maryam Batool_
By Maryam BatoolPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Rainbow behind Gull
Enchanting view appeals eye
Soft sky, infinite
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Maryam Batool
Turned 18!
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!
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So calming and beautiful.
This haiku paints a serene and beautiful picture. The imagery of a rainbow behind a gull, set against a soft, infinite sky, is simply stunning. The brevity of the poem allows the reader to linger on the image, savoring its beauty. A true masterpiece of haiku form!
so peaceful and calming. Love how it captures the magic of nature in so few words! 🌈🕊️ You are an amazing writer Maryam❤️
I can feel the breeze when reading this, so calming. Your choice to end the first line with ‘gull’ was very clever, it fits so well. I kept repeating that first line, it sounded so pretty and easy on the tongue. ~Soft sky, infinite~ was the icing on the cake. A soft drop from on high like the Gull searching where to land. A very impressive piece 👌🏽
Beautiful haiku! Love it!
Ohh! My dear sister That's a beautiful haiku! It captures a serene and vivid image. And Oh! Wow, you’ve taken a vocal+ membership! Congratulations! The haiku is also wonderful.💥💫😌👏