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Lantern Light

A Journey Toward the Light That Still Burns

By AarishPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Lantern Light
Photo by Matthias Tschumi on Unsplash

The wind is lost in the trees.

Somewhere ahead, a lantern burns —

a quiet heart of fire

swinging from the ribs of night.

...

I don’t know who lit it.

I only know I’m meant to follow.

...

The path is mud and thorn.

Every step bleeds the old belief from me —

the one that said light lives only in heaven.

But this one breathes on earth,

in my reach,

and it trembles like forgiveness.

...

Once, I prayed for thunder.

I prayed for signs carved into stone.

But the lantern answers softer —

a glow that says: Come as you are.

...

Its glass is cracked,

its flame nearly gone,

yet it keeps burning —

not to be seen,

but to see.

...

When I kneel beside it,

the darkness does not end.

It simply parts enough

for me to breathe again.

...

And maybe that’s what faith is —

not the fire,

but the finding...

Written in response to the “Lantern Light” Challenge, part of the Vocal+ Fall Poetry Series. This poem explores the search for faith and illumination, the quiet resilience of a light that continues to burn, even when belief feels lost.

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  • TheSpinstress 5 months ago

    I love "the ribs of night"! You have some beautiful imagery here. Good luck in the challenge.

  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    I love how the wind is almost... Vulnerable. From the ribs of night. Very original. It makes me think of night time as a person. A thing that lives. Love the mystery in this poem. Ooo the lantern speaks. Looks like it is a compassionate one. But to see... Hmm this line grabbed and held my attention for a while. The bit apart the darkness parting enough for you to breathe. That was so well thought out. I agree with what you said about faith. It's a simple answer but yields a lot of wisdom. Nice work Aarsh 🤗❤️

  • Sandy Gillman5 months ago

    This is absolutely stunning. The line “not to be seen, but to see” really lingers.

  • C. Rommial Butler5 months ago

    A well-wrought rumination on faith and seeking!

  • Pōlani Monderen 5 months ago

    Wow! The lantern “from a rib cage…”brought a literally gasp to my own diaphragm. Beautifully conveyed…especially resonate with the aspect of the mystery one who lit it

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    Aarsh you are a natural poet.

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