Infinite
where are you from?
Heaven
I carry the wrath of god in my bones
with the voice of an angel
I am the mirror of everything you love and hate
and everything you love to hate and hate to love
I am not just the {son}shine
I am the stars scattered through infinite skies
I am the bird that sings in your trees
I dance like a leaf
floating from the highest branch of a tree
I do not fall
I cascade over rocks
crashing waves in the ocean
Slipping through cracks
and
sinking
deep into the soil
soaking into seeds
splitting open fantasies
and sprouting
growing
evolving into
time and becoming
infinite
everlasting truth.
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
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Plato’s closet
Plato speaks about forms. That life is like a shadow box. We go through levels of consciousness, in the box, out the box. In the box the shadows seems real until you see the light and find a way out the box to the other side. The outside. Then that was real is now just a form of an old pattern. Seeing outside the box and knowing where the shadows come from Plato’s tells us-if we can understand inside the box and outside the box we can under self and we can know God and higher power.
By Kallie💗 Baby6 days ago in Poets
Comments (6)
🌼I had an intrusive thought when I read your first line; my response was simply, "Where have you been?" As I read further, my question was answered; it takes time to write a masterpiece like this. It takes a soul to burst out of its home to pierce into our world with these words; you have brought them with cadence, rhymes, and vengeance. I could feel the line, "I am not just the (son) shine." This paronomasia lets me know you are speaking to the whole; you are not the typical voice they want to hear. Instead of being just a son or a daughter, you are the voice of an angel and the wrath of god. You are someone who will react when her boundaries are crossed; for this, I stand and applaud.
Powerful ☺️🩵🌿
Tap that inner soul gurl! 👏🏼
Nice. Powerful and lyrical, with a striking sense of identity and transformation.
This is so beautiful. I really loved the mirror line. Great work!
Beautiful ❤️