Fragments of a Walk
In Thought Between the Store and Home

The bag had torn. I hadn’t checked
and now the seam gave way
not fast enough to drop it all
not strong enough to stay
A child scraped chalk across the bricks
then wiped it with his shirt
he watched the white return to red
and scuffed along the dirt
A window kept a bare chair
no cushion, only frame
the shape of someone left behind
whose silence held a name
My shoe picked up a foil square
or something thin and gray
it curled with me. It wouldn’t leave.
I brought it anyway
A dog behind a wire rail
stood still beside a dish
no sound, no blink, no wag or plea
as if he had one wish
The man outside the grocer’s door
held something in his lap
a cup or horn, I couldn’t tell
he didn’t lift the flap
I didn’t stop or speak or nod
the bag had grown too thin
I crossed the street without a thought
and let the rest begin
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. I write about rural life, family, and the places I grew up around. My poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, My latest book. Check it out on Amazon

Comments (2)
Loved it! I felt like I was walking there myself.
Fabulous writing Tim! You capture emotions very well!